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Targeted Exercises That Develop Students’ Revision Skills

By Todd Finley

Students often struggle with revising their essays. Finley explains how he uses the micro-revisions listed below that focus on one aspect or problem in students’ writing to guide students in this process.

  • Speed revision rounds: Students are given five minutes to fix one problem in an essay. Scaffolding could consist of color-coding specific writing issues.
  • Completion tasks: First, the teacher provides a sample that demonstrates a specific aspect of writing. Then for practice, students are given a similar paragraph with blanks to fill in.
  • Small group revision stations: Students collaborate to revise flawed, teacher-created paragraphs. The groups rotate to revise a few different flawed paragraphs.
  • One essay, three openings: Students write different types of introductory paragraphs, and then choose the best one. They also have to justify their choice on a sticky note.
  • ARMS and CUPS: ARMS, Add, Remove, Move, and Substitute, is a checklist for revising essays. CUPS, Capitalization, Usage, Punctuation, and Spelling, is for proofreading. These need to be taught so students know what to change and why.
  • Pinpoint peer review: Focusing on one aspect of revision, guides peer reviewers to give deeper level and specific feedback.
  • Writer’s watch list: Students track recurring errors, and use this list to check their essays.

 

Finley’s experience demonstrates that focusing on one aspect of writing at a time, rather than trying to fix every problem in an essay, builds students’ confidence in their ability to write.

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What Is Literacy When Machines Can Write?

By John Dolman

Dolman challenges the traditional understanding of what constitutes literacy. He argues that “We’ve spent centuries conflating the mechanism of writing with writing itself, treating pen-and-paper as if it were literacy rather than simply one way of making literacy visible.” While AI seems to be threatening the accepted concept of literacy, the issue is that we have never really understood what it is. He proposes that writing is “organizing thought, structuring argument, and expressing ideas coherently for an audience” whether through the voice, a quill, a keyboard, or with the help of AI.

Dolman lists three types of literacy which must be taught.

  1. Traditional literacy through extensive reading provides the models for writing.
  2. AI literacy is understanding what generative systems can do and their limitations as well as how and when to use them.
  3. Information literacy is the ability to evaluate sources.

 

He then focuses on four steps in the writing process.

  1. Inspiration – hand-written or voiced notes
  2. Ideation – organizing ideas with possible feedback from AI
  3. Iteration – writing by hand or using speech to text
  4. Publication – choosing the format for the expected audience

 

From Dolman’s experience, he has found that about a third of his students preferred to write by hand, a third prefer to type, and a third prefer another method such as voice to text. He questions why educators insist that one method, handwriting, should be used for all.

He is not advocating that handwriting be abandoned but that literacy not be defined only by the use of pencil and paper. He acknowledges that handwriting is cognitively beneficial for learning but requiring the same means of assessment for all is not equity.

He asserts that now, because “machines can write” educators need a better understanding of literacy and how to measure it. This question closes his argument, “if writing is the system and not the mechanism, what are we actually teaching, and why are we so invested in pretending otherwise?”

You can find Dolman’s full argument here.

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ARTICLES:

A Scaffolding Strategy to Help Experienced ELLs Express Complex Ideas -Tan Huynh and Beth Skelton
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Sentence-Level Scaffolds That Foster English Learners’ Independence and Growth–Tan Huynh and Beth Skelton

Free Resources to Support Students Affected by Forced Migration
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Targeted Exercises That Develop Students’ Revision Skills -Todd Finley
and
What Is Literacy When Machines Can Write?–John Dolman

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