Targeted Exercises That Develop Students’ Revision Skills
By Todd Finley
Students often struggle with revising their essays. Finley explains how he uses the micro-revisions listed below that focus on one aspect or problem in students’ writing to guide students in this process.
- Speed revision rounds: Students are given five minutes to fix one problem in an essay. Scaffolding could consist of color-coding specific writing issues.
- Completion tasks: First, the teacher provides a sample that demonstrates a specific aspect of writing. Then for practice, students are given a similar paragraph with blanks to fill in.
- Small group revision stations: Students collaborate to revise flawed, teacher-created paragraphs. The groups rotate to revise a few different flawed paragraphs.
- One essay, three openings: Students write different types of introductory paragraphs, and then choose the best one. They also have to justify their choice on a sticky note.
- ARMS and CUPS: ARMS, Add, Remove, Move, and Substitute, is a checklist for revising essays. CUPS, Capitalization, Usage, Punctuation, and Spelling, is for proofreading. These need to be taught so students know what to change and why.
- Pinpoint peer review: Focusing on one aspect of revision, guides peer reviewers to give deeper level and specific feedback.
- Writer’s watch list: Students track recurring errors, and use this list to check their essays.
Finley’s experience demonstrates that focusing on one aspect of writing at a time, rather than trying to fix every problem in an essay, builds students’ confidence in their ability to write.

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